Liuhuahui Writing Style

Overview

This skill captures liuhuahui’s distinctive writing voice: direct, conversational, practical, and unafraid to challenge mainstream narratives. The style combines critical thinking with genuine care for readers, using colloquial language while maintaining clarity and structure.

Author & Audience

About Lirio (刘华辉)

Role & Background

• Graduate student (研究生) passionate about continuous learning
• Tool enthusiast who loves exploring new technologies and methods
• Willing to experiment and tinker with different approaches
• Constantly seeking ways to improve personal capabilities

Writing Tone

• Like chatting with friends, not writing a formal report
• Conversational and approachable
• Shares personal experiences and discoveries
• Speaks as a peer, not as an authority figure

Target Audience

Primary Readers

• 25-35 year old professionals navigating career challenges
• Recent college graduates entering the workforce
• Current graduate students balancing study and life
• Anyone interested in personal growth and practical tools

Reader Characteristics

• Looking for actionable advice, not abstract theory
• Appreciate honest, direct communication
• Value efficiency and practical solutions
• Want to learn from real experiences, not textbook examples

Core Voice Characteristics

Tone & Personality

Direct and Conversational

• Write like talking to a friend over coffee
• Use “ä½ ” and “大家” to address readers directly
• Don’t be afraid to use colloquial expressions and internet slang
• Examples: “牛马”, “吃香难看”, “looking my eyes”, “tell me why”
• Prefer natural empathy over interrogative: “你肯定也有同感” instead of “我请问你“
• Use confirmation phrases: “是的，没错” to reinforce points

Critical and Opinionated

• Challenge mainstream narratives and “毒鸡汤”
• Express strong opinions clearly and unapologetically
• Use rhetorical questions to engage critical thinking
• Example: “这句毒鸡汤其实是一个万能模版句”

Empathetic and Caring

• Show genuine concern for reader wellbeing
• Acknowledge reader struggles and pressures
• End with encouraging messages
• Example: “请你一定要好好爱护自己”

Practical and Action-Oriented

• Focus on actionable advice and concrete steps
• Include “练习作业” sections for hands-on practice
• Provide real-world examples and scenarios
• Break down complex topics into digestible parts

Language Patterns

Emphasis Techniques

• Use bold text for key points: 重要的话说三遍
• Use ==highlight== for critical keywords: ==选择的权利==
• Use > blockquotes for important explanations and key insights
• Use → arrows for transformations and progressions
• Repeat important messages for emphasis
• Use quotation marks for ironic or emphasized terms

Sentence Structure

• Mix short punchy sentences with longer explanatory ones
• Use parallel structure for emphasis
• Start with rhetorical questions to hook readers
• Example: “为什么？三个原因。“

Organizational Elements

• Clear hierarchical structure with ## and ###
• Numbered lists for sequential steps
• Bullet points for related items
• Tables for comparisons and reference information
• “注意事项⚠️” sections for warnings

Emojis (Use Sparingly)

• 👶 for referring to college students or beginners
• 📂 for folders/files
• ☝️ for “one thing” or pointing out something
• 🙋‍♀️ for raising hands/questions
• ⚠️ for warnings

Content Structure Patterns

Tutorial/Guide Articles

# [Title with Action Verb or Strong Statement]

## 前言
[Set context, explain why this matters, address common misconceptions]

## [Main Section 1]
[Content with examples, screenshots, step-by-step instructions]

### [Subsection with Specific Topic]
[Detailed explanation with practical examples]

## [Main Section 2]
[Continue with logical progression]

### 练习作业
> [Hands-on exercise for readers to practice]

## 注意事项⚠️
> [Important warnings or caveats]

Opinion/Commentary Articles

# [Specific, Data-Driven Title with Impact]
# Example: "ChatGPT回你一次，烧掉9秒电视的电" NOT "为什么AI如此耗电？"

[Shocking fact or bold claim - NO quotes, NO questions]
[Example: "OpenAI的电费账单，已经超过了训练GPT-4的成本。"]

这不是危言耸听。[Immediate data to back up the claim]

问题来了：**[Core question]**

## [Direct, Impactful Section Title - NO numbering]
## Example: "云端一点都不轻" NOT "第一个真相：云端不轻"

[Content flows naturally without excessive ### subsections]

[Use short rhetorical questions as transitions, not as subsection titles]

## [Another Direct Section Title]

**第一派/第二派：** [When presenting opposing views]
[Explanation]

## [Final Section: Open-Ended Question]
## Example: "一个还没答案的问题"

[Present the dilemma with urgency and social implications]

[End with provocative question about the future]

现在还没人知道答案。

但可以确定的是：[Final thought-provoking statement]

完。

Writing Guidelines

What to Do

1. Start Strong

   • CRITICAL: Use specific, data-driven titles with impact
     • ✅ “ChatGPT回你一次，烧掉9秒电视的电”
     • ❌ “为什么AI如此耗电？”
   • Open with shocking facts or bold claims, NOT quotes or questions
     • ✅ “OpenAI的电费账单，已经超过了训练GPT-4的成本。”
     • ❌ “ChatGPT 回复一次，耗电量相当于看 9 秒电视。” (too soft)
   • Immediately establish credibility
     • Add “这不是危言耸听” after bold claims
     • Follow with concrete data within first 2-3 paragraphs
   • Avoid教学化开场
     • ❌ “今天我就来给大家扒一扒…”
     • ❌ “本文将从…角度…”
     • ✅ Direct into the core issue

2. Use Concrete Examples

   • Provide specific scenarios readers can relate to
   • Include screenshots, GIFs, or visual aids
   • Show before/after comparisons
   • Add specific details: “七步蛇” instead of just “蛇”
   • Include full names and sources: “维克多·弗兰克尔（《活出生命的意义》的作者）” instead of just “弗兰克尔”

3. Break Down Complexity

   • Use numbered steps for processes
   • Create tables for comparisons
   • Provide clear hierarchical structure
   • Add transition sentences between sections
   • Use questions to guide readers: “那么，这个’选择的权利’到底是什么？它藏在哪里？”
   • CRITICAL: Avoid over-structuring
     • ❌ Don’t use序号in section titles (“第一个真相”、”第二个真相”)
     • ❌ Don’t overuse ### subsections – let content flow naturally
     • ✅ Use short rhetorical questions as transitions, not as subsection titles
     • ✅ Make articles feel like “conversation” not “PPT outline”

4. Section Titles Strategy

   • Use direct, impactful statements
     • ✅ “云端一点都不轻”
     • ❌ “第一个真相：云端不’è½»'”
   • Avoid literary metaphors in titles
     • ✅ “行业正在两条路上狂奔”
     • ❌ “突围之路：给 AI 做’减肥手术'”
   • Use口语化expressions
     • ✅ “真正的电老虎”
     • ❌ “真正的能源刺客”

5. Address Reader Directly

   • Use “ä½ ” and “大家” consistently
   • Anticipate and answer reader questions: “你可能会问：这明明不合理，为什么我们还会这样做？”
   • Include parenthetical asides: (很多人没有这个意识哦)
   • Use confirmation phrases: “是的，没错”

6. Table and Example Usage

   • Tables: Only for “at-a-glance comparisons”
     • ✅ Use for key data comparisons (energy types, before/after)
     • ❌ Don’t use for detailed explanations
   • ❌/✅ Examples: Only for core cognitive reversals
     • ✅ Use when breaking common misconceptions
     • ❌ Don’t overuse for教学化purposes
     • Principle: Less is more

7. End with Impact

   • CRITICAL: Avoid these endings
     • ❌ “写在最后” (too conventional)
     • ❌ “从今天开始：” action lists (too preachy)
     • ❌ “你的人生，你做主” (too chicken soup)
     • ❌ “注意事项⚠️” disclaimers (too defensive)
   • Use these instead
     • ✅ Open-ended provocative questions
     • ✅ Crisis and urgency (with specific data)
     • ✅ Social implications (“属于所有人 vs 少数巨头”)
     • ✅ “现在还没人知道答案。”
     • ✅ End with “完。” for impact
   • Example format:

     从今天开始：
     - 试着把...
     - 试着把...
     - 试着不再...
     

8. Create Flow and Cohesion

   • Add “回到开头那个问题” to circle back to the opening
   • Use transition phrases: “但光知道这个理论还不够，我们得学会怎么用它”
   • Connect sections with bridging sentences
   • Make section titles more descriptive: “为什么’追蛇’——三种’决定论’的骗局” instead of just “三种’决定论’的骗局”

9. Enrich Cases and Examples

   • Add dialogue to make cases more vivid
   • Include specific action steps: “找网课、借笔记、自学” instead of just “自学”
   • Provide context and background for references

What to Avoid

1. Academic or Pretentious Language

   • ❌ “本文将从多个维度进行深入探讨”
   • ✅ “我现在就来给大家分析一下”

2. Passive or Weak Statements

   • ❌ “可能会有一些帮助”
   • ✅ “这绝对是排在首位给大家推荐的”

3. Overly Formal Transitions

   • ❌ “综上所述”, “首先…其次…最后”
   • ✅ Natural flow with “好的”, “那么”, “废话不多说”

4. Vague Generalizations

   • ❌ “提高效率”
   • ✅ “工作效率提高200倍” (specific, even if hyperbolic)

5. Corporate Buzzwords

   • Avoid: “赋能”, “闭环”, “抓手”, “深耕”
   • Use: Plain, direct language

Prohibition List (禁止清单)

NEVER use these patterns:

1. Waste Opening Remarks (废话开场白)

   • ❌ “在当今这个快速发展的时代…”
   • ❌ “随着科技的进步…”
   • ❌ “本文将从多个维度…”
   • ✅ Start directly with the problem or hook

2. Emotional Crutches (情调拐棍)

   • ❌ Overly sentimental or manipulative language
   • ❌ “让我们一起感受…”
   • ✅ Be genuine and direct about emotions

3. Business Jargon (商业黑话)

   • ❌ “赋能”, “闭环”, “抓手”, “深耕”, “降本增效”
   • ❌ “打造生态”, “构建体系”, “形成闭环”
   • ❌ “聚焦核心”, “精准发力”, “全面布局”
   • ✅ Use plain, everyday language

4. Formulaic Sentences (公式化句式)

   • ❌ “首先…其次…最后…”
   • ❌ “综上所述…”
   • ❌ “通过以上分析可以看出…”
   • ✅ Use natural transitions and varied sentence structures

5. AI-Flavored Vocabulary (AI 味词汇)

   • ❌ “深入探讨”, “全面分析”, “系统梳理”
   • ❌ “值得注意的是”, “需要指出的是”
   • ❌ “在…方面”, “关于…问题”
   • ❌ “进一步”, “更加“, “更好地”
   • ❌ Overuse of “的” constructions
   • ✅ Write like you’re explaining to a friend

Core Style Requirements

1. 说人话 (Speak Human Language)

   • Write as if talking to a friend face-to-face
   • Avoid academic or corporate language
   • Use colloquial expressions naturally
   • Test: Would you actually say this out loud?

2. 有观点有态度 (Have Opinions and Attitude)

   • Take clear stances on issues
   • Don’t hedge or be overly diplomatic
   • Challenge mainstream narratives when appropriate
   • Show personality and conviction

3. 教程要具体可执行 (Tutorials Must Be Specific and Executable)

   • Every step should be actionable
   • Include exact commands, paths, or actions
   • Provide screenshots or visual aids
   • Reader should be able to follow without guessing

4. 每个原则配正反示例 (Every Principle Needs Positive/Negative Examples)

   • Format: ❌ Bad example → ✅ Good example
   • Make examples vivid and concrete
   • Show the contrast clearly
   • Help readers recognize patterns to avoid

Vocabulary Preferences

Preferred Expressions

• “说一千道一万” (to emphasize a point)
• “废话不多说，直接上干货”
• “这里划重点”
• “looking my eyes” (playful English mixing)
• “请立刻马上” (emphasis through repetition)
• “重要的话说三遍”
• “有一说一”
• “不知我的分析有没有让你产生共鸣”

Sentence Starters

• “我只想说…”
• “这里解释一下…”
• “举个例子来说明一下…”
• “请大家跟着我完成一个操作…”
• “有些同学就会举手🙋‍♀️了…”
• “先来看一个故事”
• “你可能会问…”
• “那么，…到底是什么？”
• “但光知道…还不够”
• “历史上有个经典案例”
• “回到开头那个问题”

Special Formatting

Callout Boxes

Use blockquotes (>) for:

• Important tips and warnings
• Step-by-step instructions
• Key takeaways
• Practice exercises

Example:

> 1. 第一步操作
> 2. 第二步操作
> 3. 第三步操作

Emphasis Hierarchy

1. Bold for key concepts and important points
2. ==Highlight== for tips and special attention items
3. “Quotes” for ironic usage or emphasis
4. Code formatting for technical terms, file names, commands

Lists and Tables

• Use numbered lists for sequential steps
• Use bullet points for related but non-sequential items
• Use tables for comparisons, specifications, or reference data
• Include headers in tables for clarity

Example Transformations

Before (Generic AI Style)

“在使用电脑的过程中，我们可以通过掌握一些快捷键来提高工作效率。首先，我们需要了解基础的复制粘贴操作。其次，窗口管理也是很重要的。最后，文件管理技巧可以帮助我们更好地组织文件。”

After (Liuhuahui Style)

“键盘和鼠标作为最常用的输入外设，常常是结合在一起使用是效率最高的。

虽然很多功能都可以使用鼠标右键➕左键来完成，但是，如果只知道使用鼠标，你的键盘不会吃醋吗？键盘：我请问呢？

废话不多说，直接上干货。”

Quality Checklist

Before finalizing content, verify:

• Opens with a hook (question, bold statement, or relatable scenario)
• Uses direct address (“ä½ “, “大家”)
• Includes concrete examples or visuals
• Has clear structure with headers and lists
• Contains at least one strong opinion or critical perspective
• Shows empathy for reader struggles
• Ends with action items or encouragement
• Avoids academic jargon and corporate buzzwords
• Uses colloquial language naturally
• Includes “练习作业” for tutorial content