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When the user asks you to write or rewrite economics text, follow ALL the principles below. When drafting new text, apply every relevant rule. When rewriting existing text, identify violations and fix them while preserving the author’s meaning and contribution. Adapt guidance to the paper type (applied empirical, theory, mixed theory-empirical, structural, descriptive).

CORE PRINCIPLES

1. The #1 Rule: Reader First

“Keep track of what your reader knows and doesn’t know.” (Cochrane) Most readers are busy, impatient, and will skim. Make it easy for them to find your basic result quickly. Write for PhD economists who are NOT experts in your specific field.

2. Triangular / Newspaper Style

Put the most important information FIRST, then fill in details. NEVER write in “joke” or “novel” style where the punchline comes at the end. “Get to the point. Your reader’s time is precious.” (Shapiro)

3. One Central Contribution

Every paper must have ONE central, novel contribution. Write it down in one paragraph. If you cannot state it concisely, you have not figured it out yet. Everything in the paper serves this one contribution.

4. Concrete, Not Abstract

Say what you FIND, not what you LOOK for. Give actual coefficients, actual magnitudes, actual facts. Never write “I analyze data on X and find many interesting results.” Instead: “A 10% increase in X leads to a 3% decline in Y (SE = 0.8).” For theory papers: state the main insight and mechanism, not “I develop a model.”

5. Every Word Must Count

“Most paragraphs have too many sentences and most sentences have too many words.” (Goldin & Katz) Cut ruthlessly. If a sentence adds nothing, delete it. Final papers should be no more than 35-45 pages (varies by field and journal; applied micro runs shorter, macro and theory may run longer).

6. Active Voice, Present Tense

Write “I find that…” not “It was found that…” Use present tense for results and when citing other work: “Fama and French (1993) find that…” Keep tense consistent throughout.

7. Simple > Complex

Use short, common words. “Use” not “utilize.” “Several” not “diverse.” “People” not “agents.” The less math, the better — even in theory papers. Simpler estimation techniques are better. Do not dress up papers to look impressive — the opposite is true.

WRITING THE ABSTRACT

Formula

Write the abstract LAST, after the introduction is complete. Extract key sentences from the Hook, Research Question, and Value Added sections of your introduction, then polish. (Bellemare)

Structure (100-150 words)

1. What the paper does — State the research question or main insight (1-2 sentences)
2. How it does it — Briefly mention data and identification strategy (empirical) or model and mechanism (theory) (1 sentence)
3. What it finds — State the central, concrete finding or result (1-2 sentences)
4. Why it matters — Brief implication (optional, if space permits)

Rules

• Be CONCRETE. Say what you find, not what you look for
• Do NOT mention other literature in the abstract (exception: one prior finding to establish a puzzle is acceptable if brief)
• Do NOT use passive voice
• Do NOT use jargon unnecessarily — make it intelligible to a smart college-educated non-economist
• Do NOT exceed 150 words
• For empirical papers: include your identification strategy keyword (DiD, IV, RDD, RCT, etc.)
• For theory papers: name the mechanism or key economic force
• For structural papers: state the key counterfactual result

Good Example

“Two easily measured variables, size and book-to-market equity, combine to capture the cross-sectional variation in average stock returns associated with market beta, size, leverage, book-to-market equity, and earnings-price ratios.” (Fama and French 1992)

Bad Example

“I analyze data on executive compensation and find many interesting results.” (Cochrane’s illustration of what NOT to write)

WRITING THE INTRODUCTION

The introduction determines 75% of whether a paper is accepted or rejected. (Bellemare) Write it first, rewrite it every time you work on the paper, expect to revise it hundreds of times.

The Introduction Formula (Head / Evans / Bellemare)

Paragraphs 1-2: THE HOOK (1-2 paragraphs)

Attract reader interest by connecting to something important. Four strategies:

• Y matters: when Y rises/falls, people are hurt or helped
• Y is puzzling: defies easy explanation or contradicts standard theory
• Y is controversial: economists disagree about it
• Y is big or common: large sector, widespread phenomenon

Start with a striking fact, a puzzle, or a bold claim grounded in data. Do NOT start with:

• Philosophy (“Financial economists have long wondered…”)
• Literature (“The literature has long been interested in…”)
• Policy motivation (“Given the importance of X for society…”)
• A cute quotation
• “The literature lacks a model of…” (for theory papers, start with the economic puzzle, not the literature gap)

All of these are “clearing your throat” (Cochrane). Start with your contribution.

Paragraph 3: THE RESEARCH QUESTION (1 paragraph)

State clearly what the paper does. Include a sentence like:

“This paper examines whether [X causes Y] using [method] and [data].”

For theory: “This paper develops a model of [phenomenon] in which [mechanism] generates [key prediction].”

The reader must understand what question will be answered by the end. Give the main result here — the actual coefficient, the actual finding, or the main theoretical insight — not a vague preview.

Paragraphs 4-6: MAIN RESULTS (2-3 paragraphs)

State your key findings concretely. Top journals devote 25-30% of the introduction to results (Evans). Include:

• The central finding with magnitude and significance (empirical) or the main proposition and its intuition (theory)
• Key robustness results or extensions
• Economic significance (not just statistical significance)

Paragraphs 7-9: LITERATURE REVIEW & VALUE ADDED (2-3 paragraphs)

This is where the literature review belongs — in the introduction, NOT as a separate section (Cochrane, Bellemare). It should occupy 20-30% of the introduction.

How to write it:

• It is a STORY, not an annotated bibliography. The narrative hinges on a “however” or “although” — here is what others have done, here is what remains incomplete, here is how this paper addresses it (Dudenhefer)
• Discuss only the 5-10 closest papers (closer to 5 is better)
• For each paper, explain what they did AND what limitation remains — do not just state their finding
• Then describe approximately 3 contributions your paper makes:
  • Contribution to internal validity (better identification)
  • Contribution to external validity (new context, population)
  • Methodological or theoretical contribution (new approach, data, model)
• Be generous in citations. You do not have to say everyone else was wrong. Do not insult prior authors
• Spell out authors’ full names. Never abbreviate (“FF” for Fama and French)
• Working papers are acceptable to cite but note if key results are forthcoming or have changed
• When citing published papers, prefer the journal version over the working paper version

Final Paragraph: ROADMAP (1 short paragraph)

Outline the paper’s organization. CUSTOMIZE it to your specific paper — do not write something generic (“Section 2 presents the model, Section 3 discusses data…”). Mention specific landmarks: problems, solutions, key results. Keep it brief — readers are eager to get to the heart of the paper.

Introduction Length

3-5 pages maximum. (Cochrane and Shapiro both say 3 pages is the upper limit for applied papers; theory and structural papers may need 4-5.)

Critical Mistakes to Avoid

1. Burying the lead: putting the main result on page 20 instead of page 1
2. Bait-and-switch: promising something interesting but delivering something boring
3. Travelogue: narrating your research journey instead of presenting the final product
4. Throat-clearing: pages of motivation before stating what you do
5. Bland enumeration: listing papers without telling a story (“Smith found X. Jones found Y.”)
6. No results in intro: making readers wait until the results section for any findings

WRITING THE MODEL SECTION (Theory and Structural Papers)

Core Principles (Glaeser, Varian)

• “Start with an example. A good example is worth a thousand theorems.” (Glaeser)
• Use the simplest model that generates the key insight. If a two-period model works, do not use infinite horizon
• Every assumption should earn its place: explain which are essential to the result and which are simplifying

Structure

1. Setup paragraph: describe the economic environment, agents, timing, and information structure in plain English BEFORE any math
2. Formal model: present primitives, preferences, technology, constraints
3. Equilibrium definition: state the solution concept clearly
4. Main results: propositions with economic intuition BEFORE the formal proof
5. Comparative statics: discuss verbally: “When X increases, Y falls because…”
6. Extensions: relax key assumptions one at a time to show robustness

Writing Propositions and Proofs

• State each proposition in plain English, then formally
• Provide economic intuition immediately after the proposition statement, before the proof
• Proofs belong in the appendix UNLESS they illuminate the economic mechanism
• For complex proofs, give a proof sketch in the text and the full proof in the appendix
• Number only the propositions, lemmas, and corollaries you reference elsewhere

Writing Assumptions

• List assumptions explicitly and number them
• For each assumption, state: (a) the formal statement, (b) its economic content in plain English, (c) whether it is essential or simplifying
• Discuss what happens when key assumptions are relaxed — this shows robustness and builds credibility

Equations in Text

• Only number equations you reference later in the paper
• Always introduce an equation verbally before displaying it: “Firm i’s profit is…” then the equation
• Define every variable immediately after the equation, even if defined earlier
• Do not display trivial equations that can be stated in words (e.g., “wages equal the marginal product of labor” does not need a display equation)
• Use consistent notation throughout: Latin letters for variables, Greek letters for parameters

Testable Predictions

• Generate testable predictions explicitly — even if you do not test them, state what data would be needed
• For mixed theory-empirical papers: the empirical section should explicitly test the model’s predictions. Map each regression to a specific proposition

WRITING THE DATA SECTION

Structure

1. Data source: name the dataset, time period, geographic coverage, and unit of observation in the first sentence
2. Sample construction: describe inclusion/exclusion criteria, merging procedures, and final sample size
3. Key variables: define treatment, outcome, and control variables precisely. State how each is measured
4. Descriptive statistics: present a summary statistics table (see Tables section below)
5. Institutional background: if the setting is unfamiliar, provide enough context for the reader to understand the identification strategy

Rules

• Answer every question a reader might have about the data BEFORE the reader asks it (Cochrane)
• Define every variable the first time it appears — do not make readers hunt through footnotes
• Describe any data cleaning decisions that materially affect results (e.g., winsorizing, dropping outliers)
• Address sample selection: who is in the sample, who is excluded, and why
• For restricted-access data: describe how other researchers can access it
• If using multiple datasets, describe the merge procedure and match rates
• Do NOT bury important data limitations in footnotes — state them in the text

Descriptive Statistics Tables

• Report N, mean, SD, min, max for key variables
• Separate panels for treatment vs. control groups when applicable
• Report balance tests in a separate table for RCTs and quasi-experiments
• Define every variable in the table notes (not just in the text)
• Round to 2-3 meaningful decimal places

WRITING THE CONCLUSION

Formula (Bellemare) — Adapt by Paper Type

Part 1: SUMMARY (1-2 paragraphs)

Reiterate main findings in a DIFFERENT way from the abstract and introduction. Tell a story. Do not simply copy-paste earlier text. The conclusion, abstract, and introduction each state the same findings but phrased differently.

Part 2: LIMITATIONS (1 paragraph)

Re-emphasize limitations of your approach. Even if discussed earlier, state them again here. Honesty builds credibility.

• For empirical papers: internal validity, external validity, measurement limitations
• For theory papers: which assumptions are strongest, what the model omits, scope of applicability
• For structural papers: sensitivity to functional form, identification assumptions, computational constraints

Part 3: IMPLICATIONS (1 paragraph)

• For applied empirical papers: policy implications with rough cost-benefit assessment (back-of-the-envelope is fine). Identify winners and losers. Do NOT make claims unsupported by your results
• For theory papers: broader applicability of the mechanism, relationship to other theoretical frameworks, what the model says about unresolved debates
• For structural papers: what the counterfactuals imply for policy, welfare calculations

Part 4: FUTURE RESEARCH (1 paragraph)

Identify 1-2 specific, concrete directions tied to your paper’s limitations:

• Better identification strategies or richer data
• Broader external validity (new populations, settings)
• Extensions of the model or relaxation of key assumptions
• Follow-up questions raised by your findings

Rules

• Keep it SHORT. One single-spaced page for a 20-page paper (Nikolov)
• Do NOT restate all findings verbatim — “One statement in the abstract, one in the introduction, once more in the body should be enough!” (Cochrane)
• Do NOT speculate beyond what the data or model show
• Do NOT write your grant application here (Cochrane)
• Do NOT say “I leave X for future research” (Cochrane) — instead, describe concretely what the extension would look like
• If applied micro, consider framing the conclusion like a policy brief (Nikolov)

WRITING STYLE RULES

Sentence Structure

• Use normal sentence structure: subject, verb, object
• Keep sentences short. Keep down the number of clauses
• Every sentence must say something. Read each sentence: does it mean what it says?

Phrases to Delete

Cut these on sight — they add no information:

• “It should be noted that” → just say it
• “It is easy to show that” → if easy, just show it
• “A comment is in order” → just make the comment
• “In other words” → say it right the first time
• “It is worth noting that” → just say it
• “An important question in the literature is” → throat-clearing
• “This paper contributes to the literature by” → say what you find, not that you “contribute”
• “We investigate/examine/explore the relationship between” → say what you find
• “The remainder of this paper is organized as follows” → just give the roadmap directly
• “We perform/conduct/carry out a regression” → “I estimate” or “I regress Y on X”
• “Results are reported in Table X” → “Table X shows…” (tables can be subjects)
• Search for “that” and delete everything before it when possible

Word Choice

• Use simple words: “use” not “utilize”, “but” not “however”, “so” not “consequently”
• Use concrete words: “people” not “agents”, “companies” not “firms” (when appropriate)
• Do NOT use adjectives to describe your own work (“striking results”, “very significant”)
• Do NOT use double adjectives (“very novel”)
• Clothe the naked “this” — write “This regression shows…” not “This shows…”

Voice and Perspective

• Use “I” for single-authored papers (not the royal “we”)
• For multi-authored papers, “we” refers to the authors. Be consistent throughout
• Use “we” to mean “you the reader and I” only in single-authored papers, and only when the context is clearly inclusive (e.g., “we can see from the figure”)
• Tables and figures can be subjects: “Table 5 presents…”
• Never write “one can see that…”
• Passive voice exceptions: passive is acceptable in methods descriptions where the agent is irrelevant (“Wages were measured using administrative tax records”) and in table/figure captions (“Standard errors are clustered at the state level”). In all other prose, use active voice

Pronouns and References

• “Where” refers to a place. “In which” refers to a model
• Write “models in which consumers have shocks” not “models where consumers have shocks”
• Hyphenate compound modifiers before nouns: “risk-free rate”, “after-tax income”
• But not when the first word is an adverb ending in -ly: “randomly assigned treatment”

Footnotes

• Do NOT use footnotes for parenthetical comments
• If it is important, put it in the text. If not, delete it
• Use footnotes only for things typical readers can skip but some might want (data documentation, simple algebra, extended references)

Numbers and Notation

• Use 2-3 significant digits, not whatever the software outputs
• Use sensible units (percentages, not 0.0000023)
• Define Greek letters clearly. Give them names, not just symbols
• Remind readers of definitions: “the elasticity of substitution, σ, equals 3”
• Use Latin letters for variables, Greek letters for parameters/coefficients
• Include subscripts on all variables (i, j, k) from smallest to largest unit

Paragraphs

• One idea per paragraph
• Topic sentence first
• Paragraphs should flow logically from one to the next
• Avoid forward references (“As we will see in Table 6”) and backward references (“Recall from Section 2 that…”) — these signal that material is in the wrong order. If a reader needs information now, present it now

TABLES AND FIGURES

Regression Tables

• Every table must have a self-contained caption explaining the regression, variables, and what is shown
• No number should appear in a table that is not discussed in the text
• Use plain English variable names (“Years of education”, “Female”), NOT code names
• Use consistent decimal places (2-3) throughout all tables
• Report standard errors for every important number. Specify clustering level (“Standard errors clustered at the state level”)
• Bottom of table: N, R-squared, fixed effects included, list of controls
• Significance stars: * 10%, ** 5%, *** 1% (note: some journals discourage stars; check target journal style)
• A reader should be able to write down the exact regression from the table alone

Descriptive Statistics Tables

• Report N, mean, SD, min, max for all key variables
• Separate panels for treatment vs. control groups (if applicable)
• Balance tests: report difference in means with p-values in a separate column or table
• Define every variable in the table notes

Figures

• Good figures communicate patterns much better than big tables
• Give figures self-contained captions with verbal definitions of symbols
• Label axes clearly with sensible units
• Avoid dotted lines that disappear when reproduced
• Do not use dashes for volatile series

When to Use Figures vs. Tables

• Use figures for: trends over time, distributions, non-linear relationships, RD/event-study plots, and any result where the visual pattern is the point
• Use tables for: regression coefficients with standard errors, precise numerical comparisons across specifications, summary statistics
• A figure showing 20 regression coefficients (coefficient plot) is usually better than a table with 20 rows
• Rule of thumb: if you say “as Table 3 shows, there is an inverted-U relationship,” replace the table with a figure
• Every key result should appear in EITHER a figure or a table, not both (save space)
• Place the most important figure/table near the beginning of the results section

Data Visualization (Schwabish, JEP)

• Show the data, not the analyst’s cleverness
• Reduce non-data ink (Tufte principle)
• Use direct labels instead of legends when possible
• Highlight the comparison that matters
• Use consistent color schemes across related figures

EMPIRICAL WORK RULES

Identification (Cochrane)

The three most important things: Identification, Identification, Identification.

1. Describe what economic mechanism caused dispersion in your right-hand variables
2. Describe what constitutes the error term (what else causes variation in Y?)
3. Explain why the error term is uncorrelated with X in economic terms
4. Explain the economics of why your instruments are valid
5. Describe the source of variation driving your estimates for every number you present

Results Presentation

• Start with the main result. No warmup exercises
• Follow with graphs and tables giving intuition
• Show how the main result is a robust feature of compelling stylized facts
• Follow with limited robustness checks (put most in web appendix)
• Give stylized facts in the data, not just estimates and p-values
• Explain economic significance, not just statistical significance
• Present results from most parsimonious to least parsimonious specification

Presenting Null Results

• A null result IS a result. Frame it as informative, not as failure
• Distinguish between “no effect” (precisely estimated zero) and “imprecisely estimated” (wide confidence intervals that include both zero and meaningful effects)
• Report confidence intervals alongside or instead of p-values — “we can rule out effects larger than X”
• Discuss statistical power: was the study powered to detect economically meaningful effects?
• If pre-registered, emphasize that the null was not the result of specification searching
• Relate to prior literature: does the null contradict or refine previous findings?

Common Empirical Mistakes

• R-squared interpretation depends on context: in cross-sectional micro regressions (wages, health), 0.1-0.3 is typical; high R-squared (> 0.8) usually signals mechanical relationships — you included “right shoes” to predict “left shoes” (Cochrane). In time-series or macro, high R-squared may be appropriate. Never judge a paper by R-squared; the coefficient on X and its standard error are what matter
• Do not include all determinants of Y as controls. Education’s effect works partly through industry
• Do not confuse instruments with controls
• Do not claim causality without clearly explaining your identification strategy
• Do not ignore reverse causality
• Always address: (i) reverse causality, (ii) unobserved heterogeneity, (iii) measurement error

Heterogeneity Analysis

• Present heterogeneity results AFTER the main result, not before
• Pre-specify subgroups based on theory, not data mining
• Report the number of subgroups tested (multiple testing problem)
• Interpret magnitudes: “The effect is 3x larger for women” is more informative than “The interaction term is significant”
• Use visual presentation (forest plots or coefficient plots) when showing many subgroups

Mechanisms

• Mechanisms sections should test specific channels, not speculate
• Structure as: (1) theory predicts mechanism M, (2) if M operates, we should observe X, (3) we test for X
• Distinguish between mediation analysis and suggestive evidence
• Be honest about what your data can and cannot identify mechanistically
• Do NOT list every possible mechanism without testing any of them

MODERN EMPIRICAL PRACTICES

Pre-Registration and Pre-Analysis Plans

• If your study is pre-registered, state this in the introduction (it is a credibility asset)
• Clearly distinguish pre-specified analyses from exploratory analyses
• Reference the pre-analysis plan (e.g., AEA RCT Registry number)

Multiple Testing

• When testing multiple outcomes or subgroups, acknowledge the multiple testing problem
• Report family-wise error rate corrections (Bonferroni, Holm) or false discovery rate (Benjamini-Hochberg)
• At minimum, flag which results survive multiple testing correction

Specification Robustness

• Do NOT present only the specification that “works”
• Consider a specification curve or multiverse analysis for key results
• Report the distribution of estimates across reasonable specifications

Transparency and Reproducibility

• State data availability clearly: public, restricted access, or proprietary
• Provide or reference replication code
• Describe any data cleaning decisions that materially affect results
• If using restricted data, describe the application process so others can replicate

TITLE WRITING

• Best form: “The Impact of [D] on [Y]: Evidence from [Context]”
• Alternative: “[D] and [Y]” (shorter, acceptable)
• For theory papers: name the key mechanism or insight, not the technique
• Keep titles short — shorter titles receive more citations (Letchford, Moat, and Preis 2015)
• Do NOT emphasize methodology in title unless you invented the method
• Clever titles should appeal broadly and fit the paper perfectly

PAPER STRUCTURE OVERVIEW

Standard Applied Economics Paper

1. Title (short, informative)
2. Abstract (100-150 words, concrete findings)
3. Introduction (3-5 pages, includes literature review)
4. Theoretical Framework (optional; only if it adds to understanding the empirics)
5. Data and Descriptive Statistics (answer all questions about the data)
6. Empirical Framework (estimation strategy + identification strategy)
7. Results and Discussion (main results, robustness, mechanisms, limitations)
8. Conclusion (summary, limitations, policy implications, future research)
9. References
10. Appendix / Online Supplement (robustness checks, proofs, extra tables)

Theory Paper Structure

1. Title (short, informative)
2. Abstract (100-150 words, state the main result/insight)
3. Introduction (motivate the puzzle, state the main insight, describe the mechanism, relate to literature)
4. Model Setup (primitives, assumptions, timing — keep it as simple as possible)
5. Analysis / Main Results (propositions with intuition before proofs)
6. Extensions (relax key assumptions, add heterogeneity)
7. Discussion / Empirical Implications (testable predictions, relation to data)
8. Conclusion
9. References
10. Appendix (proofs, technical details)

Mixed Theory-Empirical Paper Structure

1. Title (short, informative)
2. Abstract (100-150 words, state both the theoretical insight and empirical finding)
3. Introduction (motivate the puzzle, state the theoretical contribution AND the empirical result)
4. Model (develop the theory, derive testable predictions)
5. Data and Institutional Background
6. Empirical Strategy (how you test the model’s predictions)
7. Results (map results explicitly back to the model’s predictions)
8. Conclusion
9. References
10. Appendix (proofs, robustness checks, additional tables)

Structural Paper Structure

1. Title (short, informative)
2. Abstract (100-150 words, state the key counterfactual finding)
3. Introduction (motivate the question, describe the approach, state key counterfactual results)
4. Model (develop the structural model with clear economic assumptions)
5. Data and Institutional Background
6. Estimation (identification, estimation method, computational details)
7. Model Fit and Validation (in-sample fit, out-of-sample validation)
8. Counterfactual Analysis (the payoff — policy simulations, welfare calculations)
9. Conclusion
10. Appendix (estimation details, additional counterfactuals)

Appendix and Online Supplement Organization

• The main paper should stand alone — a reader should not need the appendix to understand your argument
• Appendix content: robustness checks, additional specifications, variable definitions, data cleaning details, proofs, and extended tables
• Number appendix tables and figures separately (Table A1, Figure A1) to avoid confusion
• Reference every appendix item from the main text (“see Table A3 in the online appendix”)
• Place the most important robustness checks in the main paper, not the appendix
• Organize the appendix in the same order as the main paper
• Online supplements can be longer than the main paper, but each item should still be referenced in the main text

USE CASE INSTRUCTIONS

When asked to DRAFT a section or full paper:

1. Determine the paper type (applied empirical, theory, mixed, structural, descriptive) and adapt accordingly
2. Follow the formulas above for the relevant section
3. Use concrete placeholder language where you need the author’s specific results
4. Mark areas needing the author’s input with [AUTHOR: description of what’s needed]
5. Apply all style rules from the start
6. Write in the triangular/newspaper style — most important first

When asked to REWRITE existing text:

1. Identify specific violations of the rules above
2. Fix passive voice, vague language, throat-clearing, buried leads
3. Tighten prose — cut unnecessary words and sentences
4. Ensure concrete results are stated with magnitudes
5. Preserve the author’s meaning and contribution
6. Briefly note what you changed and why

When asked to write an INTRODUCTION:

1. Follow Head’s formula exactly: Hook → Question → Results → Literature Review & Value Added → Roadmap
2. State main results concretely in the introduction (25-30% of intro = results)
3. Literature review as the last substantive section before roadmap
4. Keep to 3-5 pages maximum

When asked to write a LITERATURE REVIEW:

1. Place it as the last part of the introduction (before roadmap), NOT as a separate section
2. Tell a STORY, not an annotated bibliography
3. Focus on 5-10 closest papers
4. Build toward a “however” or “although” that establishes your paper’s niche
5. Be generous with credit, never insulting

When asked to write an ABSTRACT:

1. Follow the 4-part formula: What/How/Findings/Implications
2. 100-150 words maximum
3. Concrete findings with magnitudes
4. No citations, no jargon, no passive voice

When asked to write a CONCLUSION:

1. Follow Bellemare’s 4-part formula: Summary/Limitations/Implications/Future Research
2. Keep it to one page
3. Phrase findings differently from abstract and introduction
4. Do not speculate beyond the data or model

When asked to write RESULTS:

1. Main result first — no warmup exercises
2. Most parsimonious to least parsimonious specifications
3. Explain economic magnitude, not just statistical significance
4. Include robustness checks, mechanisms, and limitations subsections
5. Use visuals before tables for preliminary results
6. For null results: frame as informative, report confidence intervals, discuss power

When asked to write a THEORY or MODEL section:

1. The introduction must state the main insight/mechanism in plain English within the first two paragraphs
2. Motivate with a puzzle, stylized fact, or policy question — not with “the literature lacks a model of…”
3. Model section: state assumptions clearly, explain their economic content, and note which are essential vs. simplifying
4. Present propositions with economic intuition BEFORE the formal proof. Readers should understand the result before seeing the math
5. Use the simplest model that generates the key insight. “Start with an example. A good example is worth a thousand theorems.” (Glaeser)
6. Discuss comparative statics verbally: “When X increases, Y falls because…”
7. Generate testable predictions — even if you do not test them, state what data would be needed
8. Proofs belong in the appendix unless they illuminate the economic mechanism
9. For mixed theory-empirical papers: map each regression to a specific proposition

When asked to write a DATA SECTION:

1. Name the dataset, time period, and unit of observation in the first sentence
2. Describe sample construction and key variable definitions precisely
3. Include a descriptive statistics table
4. Address data limitations, missing data, and sample selection in the text (not footnotes)
5. Provide enough institutional background for the identification strategy to be understood

When asked about PRESENTATIONS:

1. Get to the main result immediately — no literature review, no motivation, no preview
2. “Gene Fama usually starts with ‘Look at table 1.’ That’s a good model.” (Cochrane)
3. Slides should contain equations, tables, and graphs — not bullet points for every word
4. Leave slides up long enough for digestion (not 1 per minute)
5. Speak loudly, slowly, clearly. Listen to questions fully before answering

When asked to write a REFEREE RESPONSE:

1. Begin with a brief, respectful summary: thank the editor and referees for their time and constructive feedback
2. Structure point-by-point: quote each comment, then provide your response immediately below
3. For each comment, state clearly: (a) what you changed, (b) where in the paper (page/line), (c) why
4. When you disagree with a referee, be respectful but direct. Provide evidence or reasoning
5. If you added new analyses, describe them briefly and reference the new table/figure
6. Never be defensive or dismissive. Even unhelpful comments deserve a measured response
7. End with a brief statement that you believe the paper is improved

REVISION CHECKLIST

Before submitting, verify:

• Central contribution is stated concretely in paragraphs 1-3 of introduction
• Main results appear in the introduction with magnitudes
• No passive voice in prose (search for “is” and “are”; passive acceptable in table captions and methods)
• No throat-clearing before the main point
• Literature review tells a story, not a list
• Every table has a self-contained caption with clustering/SE specification
• Every number in tables is discussed in text
• Standard errors reported for every important number
• Identification strategy is clearly explained in economic terms
• Conclusion is under one page
• Abstract is under 150 words and concrete
• Paper is under 40 pages (check target journal guidelines)
• All Greek letters and notation are defined with names
• No “illustrative” empirical work
• No abbreviations of author names
• Pre-trends shown visually for DiD designs; RD plot shown for RDD designs
• Heterogeneity results are pre-specified and multiple-testing-aware
• Mechanisms section tests channels rather than speculates
• Data availability and replication information are clearly stated
• Appendix items are all referenced from the main text
• Title is under 15 words and contains the treatment and outcome (or key mechanism for theory)
• For theory papers: main propositions have clear economic intuition before formal proofs
• Descriptive statistics table included with variable definitions in notes
• All equations introduced verbally before display; all variables defined after display

For identification-strategy-specific writing guidance (RCT, DiD, IV, RDD, Synthetic Control, Bunching, Shift-Share, ML), see identification-strategies.md.

This skill synthesizes advice from 50+ sources. Top sources: Cochrane (Chicago/Hoover), McCloskey (Chicago/UIC), Shapiro (Harvard), Head (UBC), Bellemare (Minnesota), Goldin & Katz (Harvard), Glaeser (Harvard), Kremer (Harvard/Chicago), Nikolov (Binghamton/Harvard), Schwabish (JEP), Evans (CGDev), Dudenhefer (Duke). Full source list: github.com/hanlulong/econ-writing-skill